Term papers must be argumentative essays, 10 pages
minimum, typed double-spaced.
You may write a standard prose essay or a dialog.
The page count refers to pages of text. Cover sheet,
works cited, etc. do not
count as text. Illustrations, cartoons, pictures, etc. do not count as text.
If your paper comes out too short, it is probably not
detailed enough.
Please don’t attempt a dialog unless you can
punctuate it correctly! In particular,
note carefully the correct punctuation of direct address (when one
character
addresses another by name or by words such as “man,” “dude,” or “girl”). There’s
an important difference between “I know Jane” and “I know, Jane”; and between
“I know that girl” and “I know that, girl.” Because serious ambiguities can
result from this kind of carelessness, you must use commas to separate
the direct address word from the rest of the text, even when there is no apparent
ambiguity. When the direct address word is embedded within a sentence, you
need
two commas, one before and one after: for example, “We all recognize,
Lisa, that you are unusually intelligent.” It is your job to
edit and proofread your papers.
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KEY TO PAPER COMMENTS
Technical errors/Style issues
1 Incorrect use of apostrophe
2 Missing apostrophe
3 Singular-plural mismatch
4 Run-on sentence
5 Sentence fragment
6 Spelling error
7 Use parallel construction
8 Sentence or ¶ too long
9 Referent of pronoun or pointer not clear
10 Wordy, “fat,” redundant
11 Capitalization error
12 Word order confusing
13 Punctuation error
14 Quote marks beginning and end
15 Avoid dictionary
definitions; philosophical
usage is often different from ordinary language.
16 Underline or italicize
book titles.
17 No space before
punctuation;
space after.
18 Bad word break
19 Must have a space
before
an open quote, but no space after one.
20 Direct quotes
require quotation marks
and citations.
21 This is an odd (and
perhaps
unintentionally humorous) choice of words, evoking irrelevant associations or
mental images.
22 Active voice would be
clearer and more vigorous
here.
23 Don’t say someone
“feels” when you mean “thinks”
or “believes” or “argues”.
24 I know what you
mean, but this is not a standard
English word or idiom.
25 Sloppy imprecise word
choice
Problems in presentation of content
30 Biographical
information about the author
is usually not relevant to evaluation of philosophical argument. Students often
include it as “padding”. But soundness of argument depends only on
correct
logic and facts.
31 Speculationspsychological
influence of author’s childhood, background, etc., are usually not relevant
to evaluation of philosophical argument.
32 HUH? Vague. This is
either “word salad” (I
haven’t a clue), or I can think of more than one thing this could mean. Ask
me if you can’t imagine why I found it unclear.
33 It is more respectable
among scholars to cite from the original text if available, rather than a
commentator’s
introduction or paraphrase. Also, citing a commentator’s paraphrase or
introduction
does not demonstrate the required familiarity with assigned reading.
34 This quote does not
seem related to what
comes before or after it.
35 Quote is out of
context. The author is arguing
against this view. (Did you read all the pages?)
36 You need to explain
this more fully.
37 So? I don’t see the
relevance of this to
the paper.
38 To a philosopher this
would be a perfectly
reasonable question!
39 For maximum clarity,
use grammatical statements
— not questions — to state premises and conclusion of an argument.
40 This seems a great
deal of fuss over nothing
much. No one disputes your claim.
41 A claim isn’t more true
just because it’s
strongly felt or believed.
42 You don’t need to be
so tentative here.
43 Watch the weasel
words.
44 Your account of this
argument is oversimplified
and/or distorted. (Perhaps you do not yet fully understand it.) Remember the
principle of charity.
45 This reads like a first
draft. Organization
needs work.
46 I don’t see the analogy
here.
47 I don’t see how this
follows.
48 I see alternatives
besides the ones mentioned.
49 This seems overstated.
50 Why? This is a
conclusion. You need to support
it.
51 Avoid vague relational
claims. More specific
statement of the connection is needed here.
52 This seems simply
untrue.
Extremely serious problems
60 Your words? Please be
prepared to show me
your sources.
61 Your paper does not
demonstrate sufficient
familiarity with lecture content and/or the assigned reading.
62 Your paper doesn’t
show sufficient argument
and counter-argument.
63 A paper must be more
than a string of quotes
or a “quote-quilt”.
Predict Your Essay Grade
Step 1: Give
yourself points:
Are
all philosophical concepts explained in non-technical language? (0-10)
|
_____
|
Is this paper or dialog well organized
and easy to read? Do ideas flow in a natural way? Does anything seem
irrelevant?
(0-10) |
_____ |
Does this paper/dialog discuss all authors
assigned, and link the right authors with the right
arguments? (0-10) |
_____
|
Does the paper/dialog
demonstrate
familiarity with the vocabulary and techniques of argument
analysis?
(0-10) |
_____
|
Does the paper/dialog state
clearly and accurately all the relevant arguments and counterarguments?
(0-60) |
_____
|
TOTAL Points (100 maximum)
|
_____
|
Step 2: Now DEDUCT:
1
point for every occurrence of every misspelling |
_____ |
1
point for every run-on |
_____ |
1
point for every fragment |
_____ |
1
point for every misused or missing apostrophe |
_____ |
1
point for every quotation without citation |
_____ |
1
point for each miscellaneous punctuation
error |
_____ |
1
point for every capitalization error |
_____ |
1
point for every singular-plural mismatch |
_____ |
Grand Total (Points minus
deductions) |
_____
|
Use your Grand
Total as an approximate percentage value.
For example, if the assignment is worth 200 points, and your Grand Total
is 75, you are estimating that you will receive 75% of the points, or
150.
Beware! Your
estimate may be wildly inaccurate, especially
if you are unable to recognize sloppy writing and technical errors!
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and grammar, see the following online resources: